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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extend do you agree?

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It is better to learn
English
 from a non-native
English
 speaker in your own country. To what
extend
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 do you agree?
English
 has been spoken worldwide. To become a fluent speaker,
Native
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English
 teacher might be more helpful for students that want to speak fluently. Obviously, a country that does not use
English
 as the main language needs to learn from a professional teacher. In Thailand,
English
 is the basic subject of the
Thai
 education system. Most of the teachers are
Thai
. They are not
expert
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 in speaking or
pronounciation
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pronunciation
,
that is
 why learning from a native speaker would be a better option.
Firstly
, There are many advantages to being taught by them,
for example
, learning
foreign
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a foreign
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 language means learning their culture as well because some vocabularies can be misunderstood in a different
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.
Secondly
,
Thai
 has their own idioms
however
 the meaning of them might be uncommon
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English
, since the phrases are not the same result,
that is
 a good reason to learn with
native
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a native
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teacher
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teachers
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.
English
that is
 taught by
Thai
 teachers mostly
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 on grammar and vocabulary. Some of them are quite great for teaching
English
, but coming with speaking they need more improvement.
However
, learning with non-native could be
more
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a more
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 comfortable way for beginners due to earlier
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explanation
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 when students get
struggle
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 with the meaning. To sum up, learning from native is the best way if the goal is to speak fluently.
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