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It is better to learn English from a non-native English speaker in your own country. To what extend do you agree?

Since
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 is the most commonly spoken language by a great number of people regardless of their nationalities,
English
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 learning is booming all over the world nowadays.
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, it will be a meaningful discussion
whether
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of whether
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non-native
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 teachers are more effective in teaching
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 or not. I claim that native
speakers
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 are better in many ways than
non-native
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speakers
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 in terms of
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 education. There
are
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a great deal of
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a lot of
many
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 benefits provided by native-
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speakers
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 in
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 learning.
First
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 of all, you can learn natural pronunciation and intonation from native
speakers
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. And it will help you improve your confidence in learning
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 as well as not only speaking but
also
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 listening skills. I believe that Pronunciation and intonation are important factors to get to
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proficient
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 level
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. What is more is, the way of their thinking or expressing their minds in a natural way would be another benefit you can learn from them, which can not be taught by
non-native
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speakers
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.
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this
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 knowledge will result in improving communication efficiency in
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.
Lastly
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, you can learn about cultural differences so that you can avoid making some mistakes while travelling to other countries, making global friends and working at a global company,
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etc. There are some benefits brought by
non-native
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speakers
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.
For instance
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,
non-native
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 teachers can come up with ways to help
non-native
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 students
to
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improve their
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 based on their best experiences in the past. They can
also
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 encourage their students to study
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 with enthusiasm by themselves as an example.
Although
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non-native
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speakers
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 can teach
English
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 well, native
speakers
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 are better at teaching
English
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 in many aspects from pronunciation, intonation and
to
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natural
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 etc.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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