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Some people think that the competitive sports have positive effects on the child’s education, while others argue it is not so. Advantages and disadvantages

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In
this
 contemporary world,
competition
 in schools at both academic and
sports
 levels has become increasingly vital. Some individuals think that having tough
competition
 aids juveniles to work hard and prove their ability, while others think that failure on
such
 occasions might lead to a negative mental impact. Out of a plethora of advantages a healthy
competition
 brings, the most preponderant one is that when children take part in
sports
, they develop both mentally and physically.
Thus
, some children learn to handle pressure well in intense situations, while others feel rejuvenated when they play some physical games.
Moreover
, youngsters
also
 enhance their physical strength and posture, when they do regular exercise,
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, and practice.
As a result
, they develop a sportsman spirit and put in numerous efforts to achieve success in
sports
 and studies.
For instance
, a survey showed that 85% of sportsmen did better in studies compared to ordinary students. There are,
however
, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of competitive
sports
. The primary one is that
competition
 makes people selfish and in order to win a game, people forget about relationships and humanity.
Consequently
,
this
 leads to disputes among players.
Furthermore
, defeat in the
competition
 might
also
 have a mental impact, which might
further
 lead to anxiety and depression.
Therefore
, a child might feel that he is a failure. To illustrate, after losing the final of club cricket in 2018, I could not focus well on my exams,
hence
 my results were poor. To sum up, having put forth all the substantial arguments, I can conclude that
although
 competitive
sports
 do create strong sportsmanship and hardworking personality among the youth, the psychological impact it may have on the children when they face defeat is
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