An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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Dear Suresh, I am overwhelmed after hearing about your holiday plan to my country and want to suggest the best time, amazing places and comfortable accommodation

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make your trip memorable and enjoyable. The best time to visit my country is the Spring season which starts from August till October.I am suggesting you

this

time as you will get a chance to witness numerous festivals like Deepawali,Janmashtami and more.

Moreover

, During

this

season you will get Luxury Homestay at a very low price.I recommend you to book accommodation in one month advance from online websites as many homestays have the option of Cancelation with the full refund policy. I would like you to visit the Taj Mahal which is one of the world's wonders of architecture and the Symbol of Love.

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, you can visit Varanasi which is a religious place and enjoy the delicious Street Food too. ,Definitely you will get mesmerised after getting Varanasi's pellucid vibes. After

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, I would like to show my Hometown's culture,Monuments and Heritage buildings which are standing for 150yrs. Waiting for your arrival in My country and looking to meet you. Best Wishes, Rahil Kumar

Submitted by info.rahil on Wed Aug 17 2022

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