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Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are several compelling arguments about industrial
pollution
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 and effective
ways
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 of reducing it. While some people are in
favor
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 of a rising
tax
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 on different industries in order to decrease environmental
pollution
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, others assert that some alternative
ways
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 should exist that are more efficient.
This
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 essay will discuss both views followed by my own opinion. On the one hand, some hold the view that heavy taxes can be effective in
pollution
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 reduction in some
ways
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.
To begin
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 with, one of the main reasons for air
pollution
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 caused by
factories
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 is greenhouse gas emissions
as a result
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 of the use of fossil fuel as an energy source in some
factories
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. In order to reduce the amount of
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 detrimental gasses, governments can courage factory owners to use green fuel with some
tax
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 promotion programs.
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,
tax
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 increases can result in a reduction in the amount of waste
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 produced by industry.
On the other hand
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, the opposing view asserts that some alternative
ways
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 can help to control
pollution
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 produced by industry more efficiently. The main way to justify their belief is that high taxation may not be a concern for some profitable industries.
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, allocating budget to scientific projects about the issues related to
pollution
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 can be more help for. A good example of
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 can be working on recycling
factories
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' wastes
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 of burning or burying them. To conclude,
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 views differ about whether the
tax
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 on industries should increase in order to reduce the population, I profoundly believe that governments should provide materials and conditions for
factories
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 that are beneficial for the environment,
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 as better fuel and better recycling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution reduction
  • accountable
  • cleaner technologies
  • tax revenue
  • environmental projects
  • mitigate pollution
  • stricter regulations
  • public awareness campaigns
  • behavior change
  • sustainable practices
  • incentives
  • green technology adoption
  • negative economic consequences
  • alternative methods
  • enforcement
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