Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In our modern society, there are a variety of

goods

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sold all over the world. Especially, people spend a lot of money to buy them because of the strong advertising power even though they do not need to buy some of

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goods

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. I totally disagree with

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situation

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.

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of all, the

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have

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a serious impact on environmental problems.

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, we consume a large number of materials including water, trees, plastics and metals for making many

goods

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to

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sale.

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, our important energy resources were used drastically for the process of making them, which leads to

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global warming as well.

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,

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makes it clear that the

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effects

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environmental issues greatly.

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, the

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decrease

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the

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people

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happiness

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with the lacking of money.

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, most people try to get new technology devices and high brand

goods

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owing to the massive advertisement nowadays,

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they spend

much

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money and always suffer from their difficult financial

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. Recent research conducted by United Nations in 2020 showed that countries with many

consumption

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consumptions

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by advertisements got

a 30% lower points

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a 30% lower point

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for the satisfaction

level

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for

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their life.

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, it has become apparent that a larger consumption can

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affect

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effect

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their happiness

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. In conclusion, we discussed the disadvantages of the

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in terms of environmental issues and the happiness

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. For those two reasons, I significantly disagree with the

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. After a thorough analysis of

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subject, it is predicted that citizens will concern deeply about their consumption in the future.