Topic: Today, fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing clothes. What are the reasons? Do you think the trend is positive or negative?

In recent years, the demand of

people

for

fashion

become

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more crucial, especially in some developed countries.

People

always want to become

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outstanding

as they want, and they can buy

clothes

in

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any where

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with their hobby. From my point of view,

this

trend

bring

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brings

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a

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positive

possitive

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positive

impact

to

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on

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people

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especially

espcecially

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especially

teenagers

that

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apply

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make them

have

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some options

to

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on

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your

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their

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own. There is no denying that the development of

fashion

make

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makes

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a loss of traditional culture.

Firstly

, each nation has different traditional

custumes

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costumes

customers

which was

preseved

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preserved

. And the establishment of

clothes

design

make

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the original

clothes

become old

fashion

.

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,

in

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during

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the Tet holiday, they are

hardly

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to see some

people

wear

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wearing

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Ao dai

instead

of wearing T

shirst

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shirt

shirts

and jeans in the street.

Beside

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,

fashion

make

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makes

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humans

being

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waste a large amount of money when

follow

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following

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the trend constantly.

However

, I believe that

fashion

have

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has

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more

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positive

possitive

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positive

effect than negative

to

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choosing

clothes

.

To begin

with, everyone has a

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different

diferent

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different

fashion

sense that

make

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makes

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them have a good style and show

the

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respect for your

seld

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self

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and others.

Consequently

, they feel confident and

comfort

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comfortable

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when they wear their hobby. Nowadays, we can see

that

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the

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appearance

appearant

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appearance

of

fashionista

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fashionistas

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who always catch up with the trend of the world, which changes

human’s

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human

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thought

become

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and become

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creative.

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,

a

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research

of

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by

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havard

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university

suppose

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supposes

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that

,

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people

’s

mind

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minds

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become more

opened

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and give them

have

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full of energy to work.

Furthermore

, nowadays there are some

clothes

which

was

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were

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recycled from garbage which have

beneficail

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beneficial

to the environment. Some designer

convey

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conveys

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the message of

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sustainable

sustanable

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sustainable

fashion

to

consumer

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the consumer

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which not only

help

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helps

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people

become more

fashion

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fashionable

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but

also

protect the environment. In conclusion, there are some disadvantages of

fashion

for

human

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humans

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as well as

world

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the world

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. From my

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perspective

perpective

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perspective

,

fashion

have

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more advantages

outweight

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outweigh

than negative.