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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learna foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #reason #language #travel #work #country #someone #learna
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Many
people
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 think that the main
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reasons
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 for learning a new
language
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is
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 for the purpose of travel or
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 abroad. While others claim that there are other
reasons
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 behind learning other
languages
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. I believe that there are several
reasons
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 to learn
languages
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 rather than working or travelling abroad. On the one hand, in order to
work
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 in a country which is speaking a different tongue, the
people
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 have to learn their
language
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.
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, for the
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form
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from
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English
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 countries to
work
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 in France they have to learn
French
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the French
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language
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,
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otherwise
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 they will not be able to
work
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 and understand the french
people
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.
Moreover
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, if Arabs want to travel to the USA, they have to learn
basics
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the basics
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 of the
English
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language
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, as they will not be able to communicate and speak with the Americans there and they might get lost while travelling.
On the other hand
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, I consider that
people
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 learn other
languages
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 for
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various
variuos
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various
reasons
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.
Firstly
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, when they want to learn about
others
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civilzations
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civilizations
 and history, they have to learn their
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language
langauge
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language
.
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, if someone
want
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wants
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 to learn
the
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chinese
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Chinese
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 history, they have to learn the
chinese
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Chinese
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language
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first
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.
Secondly
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, when learning about other
countries
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countries'
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 literature, arts, and cultures, they have to learn
this
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 specific country's
language
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. Like
people
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 who are eager to know more about
the
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English
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 literature and
poetry
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 they must learn the
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english
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language
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 to be able to understand it. In conclusion, I hold the notion that
people
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 learn different
languages
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 for several purposes like studying history
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 or knowing more about literature and arts. And, not only for travelling and working abroad
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