If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition. What would you choose? Why? use specific reasons and details to explore your choice.

In our modern society, enjoying other cultures is quite popular,

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, more and more

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are interested in knowing different customs. I would like to choose Kimono if I was asked to elect one traditional thing in my country

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an international exhibition. In

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essay, two reasons for my choice will be discussed.

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of all, Kimono is

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made

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my country and it can explain our culture and history well.

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, a variety of

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materials are used to make

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, which leads to

make

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great opportunity for introducing original

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resources.

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, a famous historian named Tanaka in Tokyo university explained that Kimono is the most valuable cloth in Japan.

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,

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makes it clear that Kimono is the best choice for explaining our original materials and the culture to foreign

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.

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to that, Kimono are able to make a huge economic effect compared to other things. The price of Kimono is quite high,

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instance

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we can buy it

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least $5000. If many

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know about Kimono and are sold well, it give

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impact on the

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economic situation. Recent research conducted by the

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government showed that Kimono is one of the highest traditional goods in our country, 35% of all total income from foreign tourists was occupied

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it.

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, it has become apparent that Kimono can improve the

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economic situation drastically. In conclusion, two reasons

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electing Kimono

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discussed in terms of the cultural aspect and the big impact on

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situation. For those two reasons, I would like to choose Kimono

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an international exhibition. After a thorough analysis of

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subject, it is expected that many

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try to expand Kimono more for foreign countries in the future.