Inspite of the advances in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the cases? What can be done about this problem?

With the development of modern technology, more and more
people
are getting rid of food issues.
However
there are still some
people
in most developing
countries
who are facing the trouble of hunger, and there are several reasons cause
this
problem
. I believe that developed
countries
and local
governments
can take steps to fix
this
problem
.
People
who live in developing
countries
,especially some low incomes
countries
are isolated nowadays. These
countries
have no ability to develop their technology. The major reason is there are no equipment and funds to support agricultural technology development, and
this
can result in bad influence. One bad result we can see is
people
are using traditional methods to grow grains and crops because they want more food to survive, they may be taking some wrong actions to make soil productive.
This
can be a worse circular all the time. To solve
such
a
problem
, developed
countries
can work with local
governments
together to improve the situation.
Firstly
, developed
countries
can invest in local infrastructures for providing more job opportunities.
This
can increase employment.
Secondly
, local
governments
should make some policies to attract other
countries
to come, and develop their tourism to attract tourists from other rich
countries
as well.
Finally
, parents should realize the importance of education, and local
governments
should make education compulsory for all children.
For example
, schools can reduce the tuition for studying and
governments
can give bonuses to schools which support kids to receive an education. In conclusion, we can have some measures to solve
such
a
problem
, and I strongly argued that we will see a better situation in the future when more and more
people
will not have
such
issues.
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