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Writing Samples
Band 6

There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, • Describe the construction • Explain why the construction is a problem for you • Say what you would like them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express the inconvenience that I have to undergo
due to
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 the construction process going on in the area. There is
this
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 city project going on
two-blocks
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two blocks
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 away from my house to repair the road and
changing
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 the traffic lights. Both of these projects require the use of heavy machinery that gives out unbearable noises if used for prolonged hours. I understand the significance of the work as it is necessary to be done on time to avoid any road
casualities
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casualties
;
however
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, the use of the
constructional
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construction
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 machinery after 7:00 pm disrupts the relaxing time of the nearby community, including me. Considering the cruciality of the work alongside the
convinience
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convenience
 of people, I request you to alter the working hours of
this
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 project to 6:00 pm. It would not only help the locality to enjoy their leisure time fully
,
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 but
also
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 would not disrupt the work in any way. I hope that you will respond to my complaint promptly. Yours faithfully, Simran Kaur

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task achievement
Consider providing more background information about the specific disturbances caused by the noise to enhance your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use more varied linking words or phrases to further improve the flow of your writing.
writing tone
The tone you used in your letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.
task achievement
Your request for a specific change in working hours is clear and reasonable.
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