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Some people believe that the government should provide financial assistance to all artists including painters, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both points of views and give your opinion

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Government
 providing financial support to
artists
 careers
such
 as painters, musicians and poets is on a debate among
people
. While some
people
 think that
government
 should render financial alms to
artists
 others believe it is a waste of resources.
This
 essay will elaborate on both views and my opinion will be stated.
First
 and foremost, it is undeniable that an artist career is a very lucrative job,
government
 giving alms to encourage them will motivate them.
For instance
 , most
people
such
 as drivers and pretty traders make little income from their daily business,
therefore
 increasing hunger and poverty within the community.
Furthermore
 ,
government
 assistance will decrease the rate of crime which can arise due to a lack of finance.
For example
,
in
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the US
government
 pays individuals on monthly bases in other to support them in meeting their daily needs.
Thus
 reducing the crime rate which could result in kidnapping and stealing. Again, lots of young
people
 have different talents in some careers but due lack the funds they cannot process their dreams. On one hand,
people
 who are talented in different sectors tend to explore higher if assisted.
For example
,
artists
such
 as
musician
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 create inter-relationship with other countries thereby raising funds and increasing economic standards.
On the other hand
,
this
 may cause a crisis in the other sectors that are not being assisted by the
government
 thereby leading to ignorance.
For instance
,
people
 will position more on
artists
 than on any other career due to the alms given to them by the
government
. ,
Also
 funds that should be used for other purposes will be channelled more to one sector. In conclusion,
government
 assisting
artists
 including painters, poets, and musicians are of good measure to eradicate some criminal acts ,
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 other sectors should not be neglected.
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