In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It has been argued that printed
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or
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will be completely replaced by online
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and digital
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in the future
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can easily access
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without paying. Personally, I do agree with
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opinion
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number of reasons.
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with,
people
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tend to read
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or
books
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through their digital devices because it would be more convenient. From my perspective, they could
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immediately
immidiately
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access the latest
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by
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online
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outlets during
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day;
however
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,
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should only be bought from
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news stands
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and
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they are just published once a day.
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, most of the
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and online
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are accompanied by related graphical content
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as images and videos that not only they are appealing to the readers but
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they would make the
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of that text
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quite
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quiet
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straightforward.
as a result
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it is imminent that nobody will read conventional
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or
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in the future.
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, these digital
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or online
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can significantly contribute to preserving our environment and natural resources. In fact, since the paper being used in
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and
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are mainly from wood, many forests are annually knocked down to produce them. By deforestation, the ecosystem may be put at risk which
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can threaten many
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species
spicies
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species
.
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to
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, these printed publications will be converted to
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waste after a while that
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can
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cause different problems.
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, recycling a huge volume of paper is not only complicated but
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it
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needs a large sum. In conclusion, while some
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believe that reading conventional
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or
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will
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popular amongst
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in the future, I would argue that we should rule out its possibility. The reasons are that
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reading these through our devices is not only convenient and attractive but
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it can conserve our forests and environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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