Advertising are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Many people hold a view that

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advertisements are more and more popular in everyday life. From my

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perspective

perpective

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perspective

,

this

tendency is totally negative. The

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reason why I believe that matter

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nagtive

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negative

faces is that it

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our time.

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many

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people search on Youtube for watching their necessary information, but a lot

advertising

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online wastes their time and with

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it

distractes

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distracted

distracts

distract

them

on

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their work.

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, many

entertain

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channels earn money from advertising that

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more chance approach to more viewers than channels have well-knowledge without sponsors.

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act will decrease the

inllectual

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intellectual

levels of the social. Another reason why I believe

this

tendency is detrimental is that many shopping

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acttractive

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attractive

attracting

too much to many clients that stimulate their shopping demand and it

create

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the old-bad habit in their

consumtion

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consumption

. They do not have the filter in buying something, just buy what they like and it will

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to the waste-consuming in many

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and more serious is that it will

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effect

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too much to the environment.

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, consumers buy more leather products and that stimulate the factories

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more and date by date it will cause the extinction

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many rare

animal

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such

as tiger, panther or demand

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plastic products that

encorage

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encourage

the

manufactors

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manufacturers

making it. In sum, that bad activities will

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effect

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dramatically to the environment and

for

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our planet. To conclude, I opine that advertising common to people life that will bring many detrimental for their life, due to the fact that it passive contribute change our habit and

also

cause seriously to the

enviroment

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environment

.