The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The given diagrams outline the differences
of
Change preposition
between
road
Add an article
the road
a road
network
Fix the agreement mistake
networks
to
a city Change preposition
apply
hospital
in 2007 and in 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
Overall
, there are some significant changes between Change the article
the year
year
2007 and 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Such
as the bus
stops along hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
have been removed and Fix the agreement mistake
roads
became
a new Wrong verb form
become
bus
station
. Fix the agreement mistake
stations
Besides
, the separation of staff and public car park as well as
two additional roundabouts on hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
.
To commence with, in order to cope with the increased number of vehicles, there is a newly built public car park located right next
to the site of city
hospital and the original parking lots have turned into solely for staff use, it remains unchanged in front of the hospital. Add an article
the city
Hence
, both of the car parks can be entered from ring
Add an article
the ring
road
.
In addition
, to eradicate the traffic issues, two roundabouts have been added at the beginning and ending
of Change the form of the verb
end
hospital
Correct article usage
the hospital
road
. Furthermore
, all the bus
stops have been dismantled and a bus
station has constructed
on the west of the map and it is linked between roads and roundabouts.Add a missing verb
been constructed
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus with synonyms.
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