The number of people who choose to get married in the future is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Marriage has been an important tradition for centuries. Two people choose each other to spend the rest of their lives together. However, it is predicted that the number of marriages in the future will decrease. I completely agree with this and this essay will present my reasons why.
One
of the reasons I think more people
will avoid marriage
in the future is because of the current trend of an increasing number of divorces. Despite taking vows to make each other happy for the entirety of their lives, husband and wife often have disagreements with each other on various topics, which leads to an end of their marriage
. For example
, in the USA, 65% of marriages have been ending in divorce
, which is not an encouraging sign for people
to get married. If this
was not the case, certainly more people
would opt to get married.
Another reason why people
will not want to involve in wed locks is that an end of a marriage
may result in bankruptcy and depression. After the divorce
, one
's half or even full property may have to be given to the former partner depending upon the case. If a prenup was not signed before the marriage
, one
would certainly be forced to live in the streets after the divorce
. Besides
, most ex-husbands have to provide alimony to their ex-wives; as a
result
they have the pressure to earn more money and not succeeding to do so may lead to depression. To avoid Add a comma
,result
this
, one
would prefer not to marry instead
.
In conclusion, I fully agree that less number of people
than today will get married in the future. This
is because of the increasing number of divorces they are witnessing today as well as they will not want to share their earnings after the divorce
avoiding the chance of getting poor and miserable.Submitted by ashishspinsball on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
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- however
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