A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to reply to the purpose of
sponsorship
from Besty Company. It would be so nice of you to donate funds to our local community. The local children’s
sports
team
is currently short of funding. With your generous
sponsorship
, a professional coach can be hired to guide the training of the
sports
team
. There are several talented
students
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athletes
athelets
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athletes
, who have the potential to win in the national contest.
Moreover
, the school stadium can be refurnished with
the
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donation.
As a result
, more students will join the
sports
team
. I knew that another option is to pay for two open-air concerts.
This
event will attract thousands of tourists to visit our town. From my point of view, I believe that sponsoring the local children’s
sports
team
will be more beneficial.
This
sponsorship
will not only promote
sports
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activity
acitivity
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activity
among children but
also
improve
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health of the local students. I hope that you will consider my
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suggetions
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. I would like to express my gratitude
to
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your
sponsorship
to
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the community. Yours sincerely, Ada
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  • sportsmanship
  • fosters
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  • talents
  • accessible
  • cultural entertainment
  • boosts
  • tourism
  • temporary employment opportunities
  • patron of the arts
  • community engagement
  • long-term impact
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