some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, Mother Earth has been suffering from various issues because of urbanization, overpopulation and advanced living styles. In order to save our planet, some people believe that the loss of biodiversity is the main matter to solve, while others argue that more hazardous problems than that are alarming to us at the moment.
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, the natural features are the basic needs to sustain the earth's
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and strength.
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and foremost, there is the extinction of some plant and animal
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, as well as endangering of some particular
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,
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of human activities. Because of the loss of biodiversity, a lot of consequences can be resulted to our environment, since the disruption of the natural
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affects the ecosystem.
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, deforestation, soil degradation, water
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and an imbalanced food chain could result.
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, the
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of the human race can
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be adversely affected. The extinction of
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,
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, is an important issue to control the
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of the ecosystem.
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, huge and distinct matters have
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been happening to our environments,
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as global warming and
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, as a consequence of carbon emissions, toxic disposals and so on. There has been an increase in temperature and
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a rise in sea level because of global warming, and
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, the cities below sea level could be in danger.
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, the incline of lung and heart disease the air
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could cause the growth of lung and heart diseases and
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could lead to premature deaths.
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, the impacts would worsen unless people are serious about
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and global warming. To conclude, all the environmental issues have been standing on the emergency stage and they all are critical whether less or more effects are affected to the world. In my opinion, it is essential to rebuild and preserve the natural
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of the earth, and through the alleviation of
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and global warming, the endangered biodiversity could be conserved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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