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Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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In the current day, humans and wildlife are both suffering from a lack of
resources
 to support their
lives
. The debate is about spending the available
resources
 to either protect the wild
animals
 or compensate for what the increasing human
population
 is consuming. Starting the
first
 part of the argument by discussing
the
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wild animal's life, since there are many species that are about to disappear from our
planet
. Many reasons are behind the possible extinction of some of the wild
animals
,
for example
, unjust hunting, and destroying the wild environment that they live in it. Saving the wild
animals
 will need more than spending extra
resources
.
However
, it is about putting farm laws that
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 to protect not only their
lives
 but
also
 to save their lands and the original environment from industrial development.
Moreover
, teaching sustainability to a new generation is something that could save not only the wild
animals
, but it would protect the
planet
 for future generations.
On the other hand
, the growing human
population
 is already using huge amounts of our
planet
's
resources
 without control, which effect in an indirect way wild
animals
'
lives
. Controlling the increasing
population
 is a serious issue that effecting the whole world, not only the undeveloped countries.
As a result
, it should be on the head of the United Nations agendas, by giving it all the priority and working on slowing it down. A balanced
population
 will not only save the wildlife, but it will save our
lives
 as humans since it will increase the chances of education, and work, and reduce the crime levels. The
resources
 of our
planet
 should be used with wisdom to balance the life of both humans and wildlife. Because both
lives
 are connected with a sold chain if one went down all of the other
lives
 will go down too.
Submitted by MeMo 2000 on

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