In some societies, stress is now regarded as a major problem, and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past. However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated. They say that previous generations were under more pressure, but the idea of suffering from stress did not exist. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Stress
is a common word in everybody's life. Some communities believe that currently, Use synonyms
people
are suffering from more Use synonyms
stress
compared to earlier days while some other communities argue with Use synonyms
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matter and say that, In past days, Linking Words
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. In Use synonyms
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essay, I will discuss both scenarios and Linking Words
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I will give my opinion on Linking Words
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matter.
On the one side, Presently, In Linking Words
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are getting stressed more due to various reasons. Use synonyms
People
feel Use synonyms
stress
when they feel pressure on their bodies. Mental pressure leads to more Use synonyms
stress
compared to physical Use synonyms
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pressure. Nowadays, almost every person in Use synonyms
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world is facing mental pressures which are leading to Linking Words
stress
problems. Due to advancements in technologies, traffic problems, etc Use synonyms
people
are feeling stressed. Use synonyms
For example
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.
On the other side, Earlier, Use synonyms
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. By doing physical Use synonyms
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their body will feel Use synonyms
stress
but they will be recovered by getting some rest and taking healthy Use synonyms
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. In earlier times, Use synonyms
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For instance
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more and eat healthy Use synonyms
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they will some sleep to overcome that Linking Words
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.
To sum up, In my view I agree with the former statement that compared to earlier days, Use synonyms
people
are feeling more Use synonyms
stress
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modern era. Linking Words
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stress
can be overcome by eating healthy Use synonyms
food
, doing regular exercises, etc.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite