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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, some people believe that teenagers should perform unpaid
work
 in their spare time for the benefit of society. I strongly agree with the notion that it is necessary to engage them in voluntary
work
 as
this
 will both benefit the
community
 and the children on a personal and social level.
To begin
 with, adolescents who take part in unpaid
work
 will gain a sense of responsibility towards the
community
. When they are involved with the public and
community
, they develop a sense of responsibility and pride. Doing good deeds and performing selfless acts will teach them
awareness
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 of other people’s circumstances as well as gratitude for what they have versus what other people might have or experience. In New York, the Centre for Troubled Youth uses
community
 service to rehabilitate
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children and achieve great success in doing so. These youngsters are
then
 reintroduced to society and go on to become model citizens because they developed an appreciation for their milieu.
Furthermore
, unpaid
work
 can help children expand their social cycle and soft skills. When they participate in a non-rewarded job, they will learn other myriad skills
such
 as leadership, teamwork, communication skills and how to handle difficult situations.
For instance
, recent research conducted in Russia has revealed that juveniles who had taken part in voluntary
work
 are more sociable, energetic, and respectful to others. Compared to teenagers that do not participate, who
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 more introverted, idle, listless and were often in trouble socially, with their parents and even with the law. In conclusion, youngsters should do unpaid
community
work
 to aid in their development and learning.
This
 way they will become better members of society once they grow older and will have a bigger appreciation for their circumstances and environment. It could only benefit them in the long run.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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