Some people think that children should be punished when they commit a crime. Some others think that their parents should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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life
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. Some
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are starting
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crime
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crimes
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elder age because their
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are not strictly with
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. Some individuals believe that
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should be punished if
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do any
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. while
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other
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others
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think that
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should be punished
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if they
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commit a
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.I will discuss
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both view of points in
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paragraphs. On the one hand, education are playing important role in
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children
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life
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Children
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do
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of activities
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childhood age. They watch numerous violent
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movies
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and try to do
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of
activity
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activities
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.
Parents
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should be aware
for
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children
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. Youngsters
learning
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learn
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life
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skills with their
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.
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intersting
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interesting
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they make strictly
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aware
awar
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aware
about
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drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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of
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a survey
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conducted by (BBC) news channel
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children
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children's
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news
there
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pupils are more interested in criminal movies because their
parents
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are do
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not
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teach
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of good
skill
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skills
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in
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.The government started new rules
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for
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older
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the older
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generation if their
children
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will
be relate
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any kind of
crime
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the whole family
are
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be
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punished.
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nation's
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crime
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rate
are
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50%decrease in two decades
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these rules. On the other Han,
children
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are punished
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have punished
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for
there
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their
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crime
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crimes
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because their
parents
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are
dont
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don't
know about
life
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.
Children
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are do
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not take seriously
for
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apply
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parents
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what
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who
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say
that
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. The
parents
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are not responsible for
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crime
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the crime
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because they live in order age. Government should be
pusniment
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punishment
only
who
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those who
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are responsible for
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crime
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the crime
a crime
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.
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, (AJJ TAK) news channel
it
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apply
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showed that
children
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are living with
criminal
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criminals
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for
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in
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society and
parents
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leave
there
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their
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house. In my opinion,
government
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the government
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should be
pusniment
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punishment
for
children
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because
parents
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are
dont
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don't
know
for
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about
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children
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children's
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life
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. Because they have own
life
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they live
life
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with own
stlye
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style
and
parents
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are not responsible for that.
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