Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been argued that
people
have different views about adverts. While some believe that advertising is significantly effective in encouraging individuals to buy
products
, others hold the view that since advertisements have become so common nowadays, they are not attention-
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. Personally, I support the
first
idea for a number of reasons.
To begin
with, some
people
think that commercials have lost their influence these days. From their point of view,
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majority of
products
in the market are being advertised frequently regardless of their quality. In fact, it is the policy of agencies to make an appealing advert for their customers
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to draw
people
's attention. Following
this
, they try to
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exaggerate
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exaggerate
about the features of a product. As a consequence, audiences gradually lose not only their interest but
also
their trust in
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.
Therefore
, it is
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longer
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strategy to persuade the public in order to buy a particular product. In spite of
this
, there are those, including myself, who subscribe to the view that we can not deny the profound impact of adverts on audiences. They argue that advertising is an appropriate way to
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people
familiar with the latest
products
in the market. By way of example, if a manufacturer of digital devices
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not introduce its latest device, the possibility of increasing the demand of customers should be ruled out.
Furthermore
, I believe that recently advertisers have started new methods in order to appeal to the public.
For instance
, some of them hire celebrities to endorse their
products
. In conclusion, both mentioned ideas about the effect of commercials on individuals can be acceptable under certain circumstances, but in my opinion, advertising is likely to generate a remarkable increase in demand for
products
because by doing
this
,
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can be informed about the new features of the latest
products
and
also
most agencies apply extraordinary methods to encourage
people
to buy things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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