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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter, tell your friend about the party ask for the recipe explain why you need the recipe from his/her country

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Dear Ahmad, Hope you're doing well. It's been a long time since we met. But you always be connected with me through your writings. I'm writing
this
 letter because I'm organising a birthday party for my only son. First of all, I would like to invite you to the party if you could manage your busy
scheduale
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schedule
. I know it's hard to plan and travel from Turkey to Pakistan. But if you would do so It would be a pleasure for me.
Furthermore
, If
it
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 not possible for you to join, please share the
recipe
 which I liked most when I visited you. I loved the traditional food of Turkey. If you please send the
recipe
, I hope all my friends will
also
 like it and I need the
recipe
 because I want to make
this
 party
nique
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unique
 and memorable. I know that
this
 kind of food
never
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 been tasted by my friends ever before. I hope you never let me down and send the
recipe
 as soon as possible. I'll be grateful for your kindness. Take care. Yours Sincerely, Kunwar
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coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, which contributes to its overall coherence.
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