In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many places in the world,

children

are involved in various types of employment. Some would argue that

this

is utterly wrong, while others hold the view that

this

is a good thing because it prepares them for their future. While others claim that

this

badly affects

children

's

education

, I would argue that working at a younger age will build their personality. It is argued that working before the age of eighteen is wrong due to it may have a bad impact on pupils'

education

. If they developed an interest in earning, they may lose their enthusiasm for studying.

Hence

, they may reduce their performance in

education

and not achieve academic targets.

For example

, recent research done by a

children

's charity in Australia revealed that many school

children

who did part-time jobs ended up with simple jobs other than professional careers. Despite the

education

may interrupt to some extent, I believe that the lessons that

children

can learn from working are invaluable.

However

, getting a part-time job will expose them to the real world and teaches them how to tackle problems while living in society.

Although

these lessons are taught in schools, it is better to learn through real experiences, that can never get within the school environment.

For instance

, a pupil, who is doing a part-time job in a restaurant learns how to discipline well and how to interact with customers well. For

this

reason, I believe that work's negative effect on pupils' conventional

education

can be eclipsed by invaluable life experiences in the sense of personal development. In conclusion, despite a fear that

children

will neglect their studies if they are involved in jobs, I argued that getting work experience provides them with a better lesson for buildup their personality.