It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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it is believed that the
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process is a normal thing in natural
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occurrence
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occurrence
and it will be pointless if we try to prevent
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phenomenon. In my way of thinking I disagree with
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view. In
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the potential
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for disagreeing with
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explanations will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. Over so many years humankind has been facing the
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of
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,
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as a dinosaur or a special kind of tiger or Cheetah and various
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for
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extinction
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can be assumed. Some of them faced
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due to
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' indiscriminate hunting, many birds and other kinds of creatures,
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, but there are other
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behind
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occurrence,
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in the
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of dinosaurs
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had not been involved in
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matter, they just extinct because of natural things.
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with it has so many resonates behind it.
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, there are
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which are important to the environment and inexistence of them will contribute to a number of things,
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, the number of beetles will be increased, they are a kind of creature who reproduce a lot and if the
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like birds would have existed no more, the population of them will go top of statics and
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is not what we want, and for
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,
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must consider a lot of subjects and remedies, and one of them would
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being indifferent about the
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of
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, all the creatures in the world are live worthy and they deserve a life without any type of distress and risk of inexistence. According to much
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some
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have feelings too and with
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we will hurt their feelings.
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attitude must be stopped,
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otherwise
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it will lead us to worse situations, In sum, being fond of being indifferent about
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is not good for these
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and it is hoped that all
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cooperate with each other to achieve a peaceful environment in case of lives of all kinds of creatures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extinction
  • evolution
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • conservation
  • irreversible
  • ecological balance
  • species preservation
  • environmental ethics
  • sustainability
  • endangered species
  • natural selection
  • ecosystem services
  • wildlife protection
  • moral obligation
  • human intervention
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