It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is believed that the

extinction

process is a normal thing in natural

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occurrence

occurance

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occurrence

and it will be pointless if we try to prevent

this

phenomenon. In my way of thinking I disagree with

this

view. In

this

essay

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the potential

reasons

for disagreeing with

this

will be elaborated and

further

explanations will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. Over so many years humankind has been facing the

extinction

of

animals

,

such

as a dinosaur or a special kind of tiger or Cheetah and various

reasons

for

this

extinction

can be assumed. Some of them faced

inexistence

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due to

humans

' indiscriminate hunting, many birds and other kinds of creatures,

for instance

, but there are other

reasons

behind

this

occurrence,

for example

in the

extinction

of dinosaurs

humans

had not been involved in

this

matter, they just extinct because of natural things.

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with it has so many resonates behind it.

Firstly

, there are

animals

which are important to the environment and inexistence of them will contribute to a number of things,

for instance

, the number of beetles will be increased, they are a kind of creature who reproduce a lot and if the

animals

like birds would have existed no more, the population of them will go top of statics and

this

is not what we want, and for

this

,

humans

must consider a lot of subjects and remedies, and one of them would

be stop

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being indifferent about the

extinction

of

animals

.

Secondly

, all the creatures in the world are live worthy and they deserve a life without any type of distress and risk of inexistence. According to much

research

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some

animals

have feelings too and with

overhunting

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we will hurt their feelings.

This

attitude must be stopped,

otherwise

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it will lead us to worse situations, In sum, being fond of being indifferent about

this

is not good for these

reasons

and it is hoped that all

humans

cooperate with each other to achieve a peaceful environment in case of lives of all kinds of creatures.