The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates apply the change in the infrastructure of the
University
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campus
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between 2006 and the present day. First of all, the
university
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offices located on the north of the
campus
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are altered by the science building for the purpose of science activities.
Besides
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that,
student
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accommodation, which is
next
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to the
university
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offices, is broadened with the
second
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block.
Secondly
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, after 16 years, the teaching block is changed into an art building to serve for arts. Simultaneously, the shops and restaurants are modified by
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student
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accommodation
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accommodations
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.
In addition
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, these figures are incorporated into the
student
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facilities- shops offices and put to change for the old
student
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accommodation at the corner in 2006.
Although
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in the past, the lawn & seating area was the place for students to take a break,
this
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factor is eliminated and the
university
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campus
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just has the lake in the middle.
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, there are many changes in the building of the
campus
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. Most of the old building is rebuilt with modern infrastructures and the scale of these building are broadened with many higher towers.
Besides
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that, in 2016, the lawn and seating area, which is located in the centre of
campus
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, is evicted for other purposes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words university, campus, student with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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