Some languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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It is inevitable that human
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dependent on
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to have conversations and understand others' viewpoints. These days some
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like English or Chinese are widely spoken
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the population of natives, which results in a reduction in
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usage other
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. In my assumption, though having a global jargon allows all nations to comprehend each other easily, some traditional
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with deep history may disappear. One of the primary advantages of speaking in an international language is that there would not be any dialect barriers for people.
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, a tourist visiting another land may get
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locals without any difficulty since they talk in the same style.
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, to
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trend business owners now would have no limits or complications in making deals internationally, resulting in enhancements of profit margins.
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professors in Japan concluded that after admitting English as their business dialect, more than 80% of business holders increased their companies’
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, having a united speech may cause the distinction of some historical
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.
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to say, many cultures keep their history not only with constructions but
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with the way they talk. As an example, in ,Africa the Taa jargon is known to be the hardest and the oldest one, and there are only a few individuals who can speak
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dialect.
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, in
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globalized
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some particular
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are spoken by many people over the world. Even though, owing to
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trend they may have great opportunities to boost their financial conditions, the drawbacks given above urge others to consider about outcomes of having a word language.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global linguistics
  • cultural heritage
  • diversity tapestry
  • economic growth
  • technological innovation
  • educational opportunities
  • linguistic imperialism
  • marginalizing
  • homogeneity
  • ecological knowledge
  • social cohesion
  • communication barriers
  • national unity
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