Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Nowadays it’s true that many places are still facing
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shortage of cleaning
water
, especially in some areas which are originally lack of fresh
water
and cannot
also
afford the high price from other countries. But I still do not agree with authorities
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strict
policies
for that and other factors
such
as
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modification are vital to make individuals realize the
water
shortage in the entire world. On the one hand.
Although
Government makes strict
policies
in order to make
water
source
use
more effective, indeed, it will pay off in a brief period.
However
,
this
does not involve a change in conduct and thought
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for
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people
. when the thought process is augmented by an educational approach.
People
start refusing to
wasting
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water
with enthusiasm.
For example
in India, authorities increase the gasoline price to reduce the air pollution from traffic. But as time
going
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by, the appearance of low-quality petrol harmed the vehicle and
environment
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the environment
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.
Hence
,
this
method is not the best way to solve
this
problem and it is not sustainable.
On the other hand
.
Instead
, if
government
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the government
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will totally not make any
policies
for
water
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, it will cause many
people
use
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water
casually and
many
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much
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waste
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will happen. If we
use
too much fresh
water
, there will be not enough
water
for our offspring. And overusing will
also
result in pollution.
Therefore
, it cannot be adopted either. In the conclusion. In my
views
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view
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, we should greatly promote
water
conservation and change
people
's
mindset
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mindsets
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. Even
policies
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though policies
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will make an impact on
water
source problems,
it
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will not be sustainable without attitude therapy and education approaches. At the same time, Proper control of
water
use
is
also
the right way to go for long-term development rather than without controlling.
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