Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Nowadays it’s true that many places are still facing

the

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shortage of cleaning

water

, especially in some areas which are originally lack of fresh

water

and cannot

also

afford the high price from other countries. But I still do not agree with authorities

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strict

policies

for that and other factors

such

as

behavior

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modification are vital to make individuals realize the

water

shortage in the entire world. On the one hand.

Although

Government makes strict

policies

in order to make

water

source

use

more effective, indeed, it will pay off in a brief period.

However

,

this

does not involve a change in conduct and thought

process

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for

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people

. when the thought process is augmented by an educational approach.

People

start refusing to

wasting

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water

with enthusiasm.

For example

in India, authorities increase the gasoline price to reduce the air pollution from traffic. But as time

going

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by, the appearance of low-quality petrol harmed the vehicle and

environment

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the environment

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.

Hence

,

this

method is not the best way to solve

this

problem and it is not sustainable.

On the other hand

.

Instead

, if

government

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the government

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will totally not make any

policies

for

water

using

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use

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, it will cause many

people

use

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water

casually and

many

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waste

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will happen. If we

use

too much fresh

water

, there will be not enough

water

for our offspring. And overusing will

also

result in pollution.

Therefore

, it cannot be adopted either. In the conclusion. In my

views

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view

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, we should greatly promote

water

conservation and change

people

's

mindset

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mindsets

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. Even

policies

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though policies

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will make an impact on

water

source problems,

it

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will not be sustainable without attitude therapy and education approaches. At the same time, Proper control of

water

use

is

also

the right way to go for long-term development rather than without controlling.