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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some reasons have been described regarding the necessity for learning a foreign
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 that has different importance levels based on disparate people’s life aspects. Some people reckon that travelling or working in abroad are the only reasons for learning a new
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, while others say that there are other reasons
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 to the aforementioned ones that may necessitate acquiring a foreign
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. In the following, I am going to discuss both vantage points and present my verdict on them. Travelling and working in another country are actions which are not possible to be done without acquiring the
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 of the destination country.
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, not only could a visitor take rejoice over his
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her trip to a foreign region, but
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 there would be the possibility for him
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her to encounter many problems in that the above-mentioned visitor could not socialize with the local nation;
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, he
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she would not be able to meet his
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her needs there.
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 matter is
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 valid for those who want to work abroad with a greater significance now that working in a place without knowing the inhabitants’ mother
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 is something inconceivable.
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, the need for learning a new
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 is not limited to travelling or working abroad;
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, some people learn another
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 for their own sake
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 as a business-man who lives in his hometown, yet wants to expand his business and deal with foreign business-men from other countries. In my opinion, the main purposes for acquiring a different
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 are not limited to having an occupation or a trip to a disparate country, and migration is the most substantial one in my viewpoint in that neither socializing nor living would not be possible without knowing the dialects.
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, the above-mentioned purposes are major aims for
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 operation, and there are minor ones too. To incite instance, It is so probable that a person like a veterinarian or a physician who lives in Iran only does learn English in order to have access to the most updated data regarding medicine, or a child who learns French for the sake of his
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her parents. In conclusion, regarding the purposes for learning a different
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, both viewpoints were discussed, and I personally think that travelling and working are not the only proofs for the acquisition of a foreign
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, and other actions can necessitate some folks to learn a disparate
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 as I mentioned in the above paragraphs.
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