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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

#internet #information
In
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these day
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, most
people
 are
techno savvy
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 and
using
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 technology to exchange information on
digital
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platform
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 because of
the
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internet upgradation,
however
, it occurs some issues which
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was exist
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 before. There are multiple causes of
this
,
however
, certain measures could be taken to improve
this
 problem. To commence with, there are multiple causes of
this
 situation. The main one is that nowadays most
people
 use the World Wide Web for
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entertainment purpose only. Because of the vast
usage
 of
internet
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the internet
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,
young
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 generation spend maximum time on social media or online games.
As a result
, it may affect their work productivity and they could not perform well in their professional life.
In addition
, these days, children
more
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 addicted
of
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 electronic devices to play online
game
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games
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 and they may use adult
contents
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content
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. In
modern
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 era, digital advertisements are trending and
it
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 can be seen by anyone
hence
 they may see
such
 irrelevant scenes. As a consequence, they could lead to
offend
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 when they would be at
teenager
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 stage. Various possible courses of action could be taken in order to tackle the above. In the
first
 place,
people
 have to define a limit
of
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web
usage
 in
day to day
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 life. If they consume limited time on the net, they would enhance
their tasks efficiency
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 and engage
with
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 other physical activities
such
 as outdoor games, exercise etc. Another way forward, parents should monitor
on
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children’s activities while they are playing. If they would keep a child
lock
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 on gadgets and
setting
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 up boundaries of
usage
which
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 could be prevented them from 18+ contents.
Thus
, it would not affect their behaviour and perception which could not lead to any illegal activity. In conclusion, various factors have led to problems regards to humongous
usage
 of
internet
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,
however
,
this
 situation could be solved by individuals
to keep
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 a limit
of
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 net utilization and monitor
on
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pupils’ activities while they are playing games or watching videos. Given
this
 situation, it is recommended that steps should be taken immediately in order to ensure that
work
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 efficiency of the
people
 and children’s growth improve in the country.
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