It is not appropriate to have pet dog in built up inner city. Do you agree or disagree?

I don'
t
think it is appropriate to have a
pet
dog
in a built-up inner city. The ones who support keeping
pet
dogs for several reasons.
Firstly
, there are many singles in a city, who need companions by
pets
, especially old men.
For example
, in my community, there is an old willow raising a
pet
dog
. Every morning and night, she brings her
dog
out for walking. As she told me that she see
this
dog
as a half-son, she would be very sad if the
dog
dead.
Secondly
, the
dog
can protect the family by barking when it saw criminals break in the door. I can understand their reason to keep the
pets
,
However
, I don'
t
agree with them. Psychologically,
pets
can be
friends
of humans, but the real
friends
that can actually support you when you are running into difficulties are real human
friends
.
For instance
, a
dog
may alert you when thieves break into your home, but human
friends
can lend you money when you are been stolen.
Thus
, I claim that we should build a close relationship with real human beings, rather than animals.
Furthermore
, a
pet
dog
out of control may attack others and the situation would be dangerous if the
dog
hasn'
t
been vaccinated. An unvaccinated
dog
may carry bacteria that would infect the human body and
this
probably will harm human health. That's why many cities' governments make laws compulsory for
pets
to inject vaccines.
On the other hand
, to make sure
this
policy can be obeyed, governments invest more money which comes from the tax of all citizens, which is unfair to the people who don'
t
raise a
pet
. To conclude, I disagree that
pet
dogs are being kept in a city.
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