In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays, fast

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have taken the place of local cuisines in many countries which

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negative impacts on

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, citizens and societies. I completely agree with

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statement as fast

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has an adverse effect on

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health

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and has a negative impact on

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living of

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of all, traditional

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are naturally growing

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of a particular area and

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are more suitable and healthier for the local people.

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, they contain all essential nutrients required for proper growth and development of a body and are according to the digestive system of the folks.

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, fast

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are bad for

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and are causing obesity in youngsters which

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might cause several diseases like Type2 diabetes, and hypertension in individuals. According to a recent survey conducted by an NGO in the USA, 60-70% of American people are obese, and the main reason behind

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is junk

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foods

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like pizzas and burgers.

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, unhealthy eateries could be linked directly to the deteriorating

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of individuals and eventually, the whole society.

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,

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growing fast

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trend has impacted

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families

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too.

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, people no longer eat together at

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with their

families

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due to

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which family connections are fading away.

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younger children these days prefer to eat out with their friends,

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of spending time with their

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. While in the past,

families

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used to cook meals at home and have them together ,

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, they were more connected with each other. In conclusion, fast

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is detrimental to people’s

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and is impacting individuals,

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and societies adversely;

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, I believe that folks should try to minimize their consumption.

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, they should consume traditional meals and contribute to the development of a healthy society