In some countries average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems. What measures could be taken to solve them.

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It is said that health is wealth.

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proverb is true as several nations are losing their fitness because of the increasing average body weight of the community. In

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countries, obesity has become a major problem causing serious issues to the well-being of common people. I would try to shed light on both causes and remedial measures to prevent

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, I will discuss the causes of

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issue. In the recent past, it has been observed that the eating behaviour of people has changed a lot. People are now more addicted to junk food than ever before, which has adverse effects on their energy. Fast cuisine weakens the immune system of the frame and causes fatness. A survey conducted in America

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shows that more than 36% of adults eat junk cooking on any given day.

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, less inclination toward physical workouts

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as jogging or sports is

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the main reason for getting fat.

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, the kids of

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era prefer to play video games

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of taking part in games physically.

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, the daily tiring and busy routine

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to fitness issues, because we have little time to spend on our body’s fitness.

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, everyone is

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involved in enhancing and improving his lifestyle, for

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, he has to work from dawn to dusk. So, these are all factors which contribute to gaining body weight resulting in poor strength.

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, let's discuss the measures that can we take to overcome

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unhealthy situation.

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of all, we should focus on our diet, which would be simple and healthy. If someone does not take sound food, he does not enjoy a healthy life.

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to nourishment is exercise, we should

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give some time to athletics

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as running and playing sports games. So overall, these are some ways to mitigate the effects of fatness on the human body. In conclusion, to live a healthy and fit life one should focus on one's daily routines,

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as eating habits and drilling capacity. If you are physically fit, you will enjoy a sound life.

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In some countries average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems. What measures could be taken to solve them.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter: -apologize for not attending -explain why you did not attend -say what you will do to make up for it