The only way to ensure road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent do you agree?
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people
who drives
a Change the verb form
drive
car
are becoming people
, who drives
a vehicle very fast and other Change the verb form
drive
people
are staying under
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in
the
danger. I try to give a solution to Correct article usage
apply
this
issue below.
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I agree
I'm
agree with that. Correct your spelling
I'd
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the Change preposition
In
last
year
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,year
cars
are becoming very fast and modern. Lots of affluent people
who drives
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drive
a
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apply
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supercar
super
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supercar
car
are putting dot
on their lives because of Add an article
a dot
the dot
traffic
. Before that, they'd heard about laws
of the ways. A lot of motorists want to drive
a car
at
safe roads. If the Change preposition
on
government
puts a lot of stricter and
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apply
traffic
wardens to
roads, Change preposition
on
people
will drive
a car
according to laws
. For example
, in Dubai, people
drive
a car
according to laws
. Because, if they drive
a car
in
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at
higher
speed, they have to pay lots of cash to Correct article usage
a higher
traffic
wardens or government
. If you claim Correct article usage
the government
this
cash twice or more, you can buy a normal vehicle to drive
. Amazingly, If people
drive
car
out Add an article
the car
a car
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of laws
laws
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law
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pay kinda taxes, government
will get the Add an article
the government
car
and don't
gives back
. But in Uzbekistan, Correct pronoun usage
it back
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
(without Tashkent citizens) drive
cars
very fast. This
is problem
for everyone who Add an article
a problem
walk
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walks
and
across the road. Correct word choice
apply
This
issue happens because of less quality and quantity of traffic
lights.
In
the other hand, Change preposition
On
people
innovated electrocars
. Correct your spelling
electro cars
The modern
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Modern
electrocars
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electro cars
has
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have
a
important option. The Change the article
an
car
will direct Correct your spelling
itself
it self
by switching on automatic options. Interestingly, Correct your spelling
itself
electrocars
don'Correct your spelling
electro cars
t
have a
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an
emitsand
it's Correct your spelling
emits and
emits
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useful
usefull
for Correct your spelling
useful
people
health. Motorists don'Change noun form
people's
t
hear any volumes and voices. Because electrocars
are very Correct your spelling
electro cars
peacefull
. In the Correct your spelling
peaceful
last
to years
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,years
people
innovated a system and the system has a new options
. Correct the article-noun agreement
a new option
new options
First
is you can talk to your car
and the second
is car
directs itself according to laws
. Electro
cars
knows
maps and can see the road view and illustrate on the monitor. Change the verb form
know
People
who want to protect the
nature ought to Correct article usage
apply
drive
electro
cars
.
In conclusion, government
should announce a high paying Add an article
the government
stricters
(kind Correct your spelling
stricter
a
taxes) and produce more Correct your spelling
of
electro
cars
. In my opinion, the government
ought to produce more electrocars
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electro cars
instead
of stricters
. If Correct your spelling
stricter
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everyone
everyon
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everyone
drives
electro
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an electro
car
everyone will be healthy.Submitted by javokhir_85 on
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