It is an undeniable fact that
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developed countries allow old
people
to
work
at any age they want in their choice of field. In some
seniors may retire whenever they prefer.
However
, there are both advantages and disadvantages to
this
policy, I think merits are more than demerits.
The
first
and foremost reason to support my ideology is that
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working longer period of time in life is more beneficial than
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. On the other side, it
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healthy as nowadays , youngsters do not spend their valuable time with their parents and they feel lonely sometimes. Another reason to support my justification is that
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multinational companies only give responsibilities to their older employers because
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good experience and they can take
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very smoothly .
For example
, the
higher
one thousand old
people
as they know they can leads industry without loss .
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to that , some
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require
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and fit body
such
as sports and transportation , so it would be more beneficial when they
work
without retirement.
Nonetheless
, some
people
believe that there are many disadvantages when elder
people
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of time .
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as become older . Some jobs require focus and mental health
such
as teacher, doctor and pilot. For smooth functioning of
individuals should not allow
work
with older
people
.
In conclusion , the government should pass a holistic approach to retirement age and advantages are there but disadvantages can potentially affect a whole community .