Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet, To what extent do you aree or disagree?

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Some people believe that everybody should stop the consumption of
meat
because humans do not need to eat
meat
to live a healthy life. I agree with
this
argument for some reasons and those will be explained below.
To begin
with, humans need to intake some main components to live healthy in their diets and these components must be intaken in a way which is balanced. There is no doubt that
meat
is a product which is rich in
protein
.
However
, it is a poor source of fat and carbohydrate which means it is not a part of a balanced diet. There is a fact that an individual can intake the
protein
that is
needed from another source
such
as eggs and soya plants. In an article which is written in 2019, the percentages of
protein
in
meat
and soya have compared and the results demonstrated that the soya plant has a bigger amount of percentage of
protein
. Since that, people do not need to consume
meat
to gain
protein
.
Furthermore
,
meat
consumption has some harmful effects on humans and the world. From point of
this
view, people must not eat cows even though it is not necessary for a balanced diet. The cows can store drugs in their muscles and when a person eats that
meat
it means he/she ate that drug and it might lead that person to death due to antibiotic allergy.
In addition
to
this
, the production of methane gas has a harmful effect on the world. In a conclusion, I strongly believe that if individuals become vegetarian they can take the main elements from another source in order to become healthy
thus
the world and individuals will be protected from the harmful effects of the
meat
industry.
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