our planet is facing much threat, to what extent you agree or disagree.

While living on the earth, we see many kinds of dangerous things. I agree with
this
problem of earth and I will explain the rational reasons in
this
essay.
First
of all, it is evident that climate change is horrible nowadays.
For example
, global heating, extinct animals, and rising sea level. Researchers, always say that it is too late to stop these problems.
However
, Nations make efforts to recover these issues
such
as less use of plastics, recycling and using one good product longer.
Moreover
, the number of animals is decreasing. As I mentioned, their ecosystems are lost by increasing sea levels and the number of species that hunt and eat is
also
declining. It is not only animals but
also
humans that may proceed to end their life.
Furthermore
, there is no doubt that people might wage war between countries because of developing our technologies.
For instance
, toxic gas, high-quality missiles, and attacking their lifelines. When using these kinds of products, they tend to emit a lot of unhealthy gas into the ear. As for
this
, it can lose its beautiful nature.
In addition
, the ground lost control of their basement.
This
is because people make tall buildings and get rid of the raw trees. Since it is easy to occur ground slides and floods. Whereas, people do eco-actions
such
as planting trees. In a nutshell, I believe that residents are able to find the solution to these issues.
This
is a time to endure to save and make an effort for the earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity loss
  • pollution
  • ecosystems
  • overfishing
  • sustainable practices
  • resource depletion
  • environmental degradation
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable agriculture
  • food security
  • water scarcity
  • habitat destruction
  • environmental considerations
  • global cooperation
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