Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighboor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

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Dear Mr Brown, I am your

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-door resident and writing

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letter with regard to bringing your attention to the problem facing the high loud music all late night. I would like to inform you

this

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situation is absolutely disturbing me and probably other neighbours by all means.

Firstly

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, of course, as you enjoy listening to music in your apartment is fair.

However

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, the loudness was too high,

therefore

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I could not fall asleep in time. As I require having to get up early in the mornings approximately 6:00 am. Sleeping is not enough,I can not concentrate on my duties at work properly.

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, I am worried about my health as well which might be affected by repetitive sleepness nights. I desire you suggest some solutions

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, while you listening to the music turning the volume %50 down

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using headphones could be a solution either.

As a result

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, I wholeheartedly believe that you would be taking some actions to provide against

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appaling issue

otherwise

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I should report whether to apartment management or citizen official at all. I am looking forward to your helping me Yours Faithfully

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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