In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
Nowadays our life has been changed by industrialization.
moreover
, telecommuting has gained more popularity .Linking Words
although
there are many benefits of working from home, there are many drawbacks to consider. in Linking Words
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the biggest advantage is that employees can have their liberty at home which means that they determine their environments, Use synonyms
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, breaks, and hours. If telecommuters were fully committed to their job, they would achieve a higher rate of productivity. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, virtual workers have fewer distractions rather than regular employees. Linking Words
for example
, traditional occupations might be ineffective Linking Words
as a result
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hours, noise, and other distractors .Use synonyms
therefore
, home-base-office can be more beneficial rather than conventional jobs.
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there are many good points of distance Linking Words
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, it can cause serious problems Use synonyms
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as isolation, heart disease, and mental disorders. telecommuters spend a lot of time in their office without any human beings and it can cause loneliness in them. Linking Words
for instance
, my friend, who is an IT manager in a big company, have been suffered from Linking Words
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problem .as mentioned in the Linking Words
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sentences less activity will have conduced to lots of diseases Linking Words
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as heart attack and major depression.
in conclusion, Linking Words
although
working from your properties has many positive aspects Linking Words
such
as freedom and a high rate of productivity, there are many negatives to consider like isolation and disease.Linking Words
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