We are living in a 'throwaway society'. Discuss the causes and problems.

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Nowadays, we live in a materialistic society and it increases the chances to follow the habit of using and

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.There are several reasons that lead to

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modernization and urbanization. In

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essay, I will be discussing these reasons in detail and all possible problems

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caused by them.

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, modernization has made life more competitive among the

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,especially

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who work. Both gents and women find it difficult to maintain house chores and have high financial stability,

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they end up buying more appliances that could ease their job.Even if they are broke,they think that repairing and reusing them is a waste of money and unworthy.

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, a sudden rise in urbanization promotes the rapid growth of entrepreneurs.

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,it is not difficult for

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to get what they want.At present, a large number of products are available in the market even at the cheapest rate.

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makes

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purchase and store more and more unnecessary things. To illustrate, most Indians now use a lot of electronic gadgets like dishwashers and washing machines ,once they stop working these

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would purchase new ones without giving

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thought.

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helps to the boom of new companies. The main problem caused by

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throwaway society is environmental pollution like water ,air and land pollution. There is no proper process for recycling or burying products

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made up of plastics or fibres. For these reasons,it would make life harder on

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planet. Another problem is that

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the rising demand for materials may create a corrupted society. To illustrate, unlike in past times

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use matching shoes for attire ,knowing

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trend a lot of companies make shoes of bad quality. To sum up, environmental pollution and illegal activities are being grown by the competition of

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to buy new things each and every day.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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