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All students should study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 art and music subjects were tightly included in the education process. A vast majority of people suppose that
such
 an approach help gains a broader mind for pupils, while others claim it is a time wastage for those who are not gifted. In
this
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First
 and foremost, art not only is the bearer of cultural heritage
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 but
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 represents important historical moments. Indeed, ancient sculptures of Greece gods are a key feature for understanding how those people described natural phenomena by representing them as gods. Another major reason is old canvases can show us different landscapes of places that we denied
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 to see now as they are lost forever. With
this
 in mind, students will develop their minds broadly by observing a variety of arts, rather than reading dry facts about them. Another overlooked reason, individuals who are not blessed with playing musical instruments can learn about musical notes. It is not a secret that many song authors are terrible at playing
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musical instruments.,
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, they can understand the vibe of different musician
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 and invent incredible poetry. I suppose if they have not
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school, we would not have got many popular songs nowadays. In conclusion, schools should not exclude any subjects from their program as it helps students develop
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 and get
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wider
knowladges
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, I found history one of the dullest
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 in the whole education system, and we should use all available tools to make it more enjoyable.
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