In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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era, as technology is boosting,

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that means of transportation will

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change their mode. In the coming decades, all kinds of vehicles will be driven mechanically rather than manually. Without any

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people will commute from one place to another desired

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disadvantages are prevailing

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of advantages. In

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some of

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advantages, how disadvantages are more, will be discussed. On the one hand, thousands of people are financially

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on their jobs of driving especially in

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developing countries,

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become incomeless because of self-driven trucks and buses.

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installation of high technology machinery and the whole GPS system will ultimately

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in high prices

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private as well as public automobiles.

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, according to the survey that was organised by KIA motors 80%

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of the motor vehicles have

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increased after the introduction of

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features of driverless cars.

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scenario will

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effect

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economically both in the form of

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in livelihood and expensive

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purchasing

purcahsing

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purchasing

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conveyence

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conveyance

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items. Despite of disadvantages there are a few advantages

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situation, like the cost will be high, but the person whoever unable to drive

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will become

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independent

independant

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independent

for

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their travelling. So, automatically controlling wheels will be advantageous for handicaps.

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, one-fourth of the

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population of America has become self-

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technology, as mentioned in an article.

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, these additions in vehicles

primarily

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convenient for special citizens. To conclude, I believe that the cons will be higher as compared to the pros. The more will be

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automation, the less will be

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labour.