Now technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages .

In

this

contemporary era,

technology

has increased at an alarming rate . A number of new

technologies

have changed the way of style

children

spend their

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spare

time

. In my

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perspective

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perspective

, it had merits outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, there are some merits of new

technologies

such

as mobile phones,

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,

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etc. The

first

and

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foremost

formost

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foremost

is that new

technology

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an essential role in every

children

’s life. Due to

this

, they can gain

a

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alot

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a lot

lot

of knowledge on it and it

is

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also

help in doing

studying

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.

Secondly

, it is

great

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source of entertainment . If they use

technology

their mind become creative , smart, and energetic .

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, a survey

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taken by The

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of USA newspaper , in America 2018,

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that 87% of the youngster

were spend

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their quality

time

with

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of

technologies

things.

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the other hand, there are few demerits of new

technology

.

Firstly

, it gives a negative impact on

children

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health and body.

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children

spend their long hours on

technologies

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gadgets

such

as

,

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computer

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computers

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and video games. which gives a side

effect

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effects

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on their body like

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eye side week, back and body pain and headache .

Secondly

, it

also

gives a bad effect on their study and

behavior

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. Most

of

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the

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children

waste their full

time

on

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using it and they do not concentrate on their

study

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.

Moreover

, they like to live alone in their room and they do not spend

a

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spare

time

with family. Due to

this

, they have some changes in their nature, they become

depresse

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depressed

, aggressive and irritate .

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, a survey

was

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taken by The

time

of New York newspaper, in 2019

was

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that new

technologies

have decreased

87

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% to

more

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74% in

past

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6 years. In conclusion , I want to reiterate my words that new

technologies

are more beneficial for research, study,

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information and entertainment , but it is

also

gives a negative effect on

children

’s life.