It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, whether constructing
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to cater for the basic needs or the aesthetic needs of people has sparked a heated debate. I am of the opinion that it had better strike a happy medium between the workability and
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of the constructions. Compelling arguments can be proposed that there are myriad merits to the notion that accommodations should afford the fundamental requirements of their settlers. In the
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place, Considering the need for shelter according to the pyramid needs of humans, houses have to offer the highest level of safety. Essentially, whatever your house is beautiful if you suffer from the lack of safety it would be good-for-noting. In the
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place, more gorgeous structures have more cost of maintenance. ,
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excessively attaching emphasis on having more handsome
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people's affordability can be lowered.
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yet importantly, the main and foremost purpose of purchasing a house is nothing but relief, convenience, and security that just can be provided by indoor facilities rather than the glamorous facade of the building. In fact, the most glamorous facade would be a merely significant contribution to the
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of the neighbourhood and the city serving no purpose regarding the peace, convenience, and comfort of the residents.
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, improving the cityscapes is directly contingent on how much time architectures expend on beautifying the
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some purposes like safety, security, and convenient amenities should be received the top precedence, it is undeniable that the beautiful surface of the building or architectural interior design can make people feel refreshed, and rejuvenated.
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, exercising different architectural designs or some periodical renovation in the construction are highly required to take settlers' minds off the monotonous interior and exterior design;
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, discounting the significance of architecture to the
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of the
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and pursuing lifelong accommodation in an awful house comes about with nothing other than depression, contrary to the sustainability that would be guaranteed by attaching rational remark to architecture artworks in every place of houses. In conclusion, having considered the above-mentioned arguments, I am convinced that having houses well-balanced in terms of captivating
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and amenities makes life more sustainable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • prioritize
  • building design
  • meet the needs
  • occupants
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • landmarks
  • symbolize
  • balance
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