Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

These days, the level of vices has increased substantially . In

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problem and

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suggest some solutions on how to tackle it.

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, one of the main causes of crime is unemployment. When

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are unemployed , they tend to engage in unlawful acts in order to earn a living. To illustrate, a person who has no job

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will most likely be involved in stealing and armed robbery for survival. To solve

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problem , the government should embark on a massive job creation.

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who are engaged meaningfully are less likely to commit offence . To demonstrate,

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survey by the Delta State Bureau of Statistics found that 80% of respondents admitted to

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committed an offence at least once when they

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than when they were not. Notwithstanding, if the rate of

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is still rising despite the availability of jobs ,

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unemployment is not a cause of

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problem.

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, another cause of rising criminal activities is laziness. Some

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are not interested in doing legal jobs , but they would want to rely

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illegal ways of getting quick money

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as drug trafficking.

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, The Times recently reported that 26% of

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who are idle would prefer to acquire wealth through unlawful and quick means. To tackle

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issue, the government should set up a nationwide awareness campaign, sensitizing the public on the importance of doing lawful

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.

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in businesses that are against the law, might be prosecuted and if found guilty, will be sent to prison. In conclusion ,

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a variety of problems are responsible for the rise in criminal activities, these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is

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to deal with these challenges, and they should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.