A neighbor has damaged your car while parking his/her vehicle in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: * explain why you are writing * describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it * recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation.

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Dear Mr Singh, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I, Kuljeet Kaur, residing at your locality at house no. 141 and it has been ages since we meet. I am writing to you to complain about the damage caused to my car due to your car. Yesterday, it was parked in front of my house and it got hit by your vehicle when you parked it in the lane. As it is my brand new automobile,

thus

, it affects me a lot. Due to the accident, the headlight is fully damaged and it

also

has scratches on its outer body.

Furthermore

, it was really precious for me as it was gifted by my father on my

last

birthday.

Thus

, my feelings are attached to it and it got hurt. It would cost me around ₹25,000/-.

Hence

, I am asking you to pay for the damages or compensate me the amount of the loss. It will resolve the situation and remove any

further

clashes between us. Hope you will pay consideration to the matter. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Wed Aug 31 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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