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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with people who have a high-level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era , a few groups of people believe that labour
work
 should be earning less than
others
 , while some crowd get more bucks , due to their academic level. I think that it is totally wrong and disagree with the statement. The
first
 and foremost is that currently, they are the king of the field
who
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and
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have
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has
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 different types of skills. They look altered rather than
others
 , owing to achieving a skill , which
others
 do not have ,
For instance
 , a number of sportsmen have different skills in any games,
consequently
 , they get more capital than another crowd.
Moreover
 , some physical activities are dangerous more than we thought so they get high salaries. They get it , due to the risk of life ,
For example
 , many European countries provide a huge range of opportunities for electronic
work
 , in light of the fact that it is life-threatening
work
 ,
consequently
 , they get flooded opportunities than graduated.
Furthermore
 , some works only need physical
work
 , while we cannot our brain , at that time we have to pay more than
others
 , due to the
work
 , it will not do any person ,
such
 as Gym trainers get high salary and
also
 they teach physical exercise for the body ,
as a result
 , wherever without them it will not run. In conclusion , we should know about them and
everyone
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 is vital for us because somewhere we need their help but we do not think it and a person , who works physical , they are important as well as educated.
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