You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: • Mention why you would like to join the trip. • Ask some general questions about the trip. • Mention how you can be helpful.
Dear Mr John,
I am writing
this
letter with regard to the upcoming school trip to Los Angeles. Linking Words
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, I would be delighted to join Linking Words
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trip to accompany my son.
To being with, I am fond of travelling and exploring new places and Los Angeles is in my bucket list for a long time. Linking Words
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, I can keep an eye on my kid and other children to make sure they are safe.
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, I would like to know the itinerary . Linking Words
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, please share the details of accommodation, refreshment facilities and the measures followed by the school to ensure children’s safety.
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, I can help you to organize Linking Words
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tour, as I worked for a tourism company before and have organized a few successful trips. Linking Words
Besides
that, I can plan some fun activities to keep the kids entertained throughout the travel. Linking Words
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, I have a friend who works in Disneyland and can help us to get a huge discount on the entry fee.
I hope my suggestion will be taken into consideration and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Priya KalapureddyLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite