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In the future, no body will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#future #body #newspapers #book
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Some students believe that in the future most
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newspapers and books will be
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available
avilable
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available
 online. In my opinion, What I would like to say is technology will change our
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 forever. My points of view will be explained in the following lines. In the beginning, Education has
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changed during the
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, while some people think that school learning
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 the traditional way, youth believe that modern methods have to be used. A prime example is
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 the websites which
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 offering all the studying materials for free now as in Egypt the government has
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 a free tablet and free access
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recorded
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 lectures can be found on the sites, but
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 lessons can be uploaded for learners.
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, Printing books and newspaper cost
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 money
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everyday
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, It can be said that usual stories can be so costly even if it was printed with new machines. A salient example is the most famous
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 newspaper Alahram
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 when they
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found that most
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people
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 prefer to use the
interent
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internet
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lunched
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 their new
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electronic
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, what can be said is younger generations prefer to use faster ways to reach the news. In conclusion,
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this
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eaiser
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easier
 ways to improve studying and reading to make them easier.
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